One of my favorite poems

[twirlgrrl]

An LJ friend just posted a lovely, melancholy poem. I'm inspired to post one of my favorites, just in case I haven't already. I love melancholy and romance, but also bitter, bleak and dark things. This poem is not poignant or melancholy like the one my friend posted, but it's certainly VIVID.

Ummm... Enjoy?


Love Song: I and Thou
By Alan Dugan

Nothing is plumb, level or square:
    the studs are bowed, the joists
are shaky by nature, no piece fits
     any other piece without a gap
or pinch, and bent nails
    dance all over the surfacing
like maggots. By Christ
    I am no carpenter. I built
the roof for myself, the walls
    for myself, the floors
for myself, and got
    hung up in it myself. I
danced with a purple thumb
    at this house-warming, drunk
with my prime whiskey: rage.
    Oh I spat rage's nails
into the frame-up of my work:
    It held. It settled plumb.
level, solid, square and true
    for that one great moment. Then
it screamed and went on through,
    skewing as wrong the other way.
God damned it. This is hell,
    but I planned it I sawed it
I nailed it and I
    will live in it until it kills me.
I can nail my left palm
    to the left-hand cross-piece but
I can't do everything myself.
    I need a hand to nail the right,
a help, a love, a you, a wife.    

Comments

[eac.livejournal.com]

Ha. This was read to me in an English class in 12th grade. It made a big impression.

[twirlgrrl.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I think I was a senior in high school too--Advanced English. We had a wonderful teacher from South Africa. I credit him with my ability to appreciate poetry.

This poem makes much more sense to me now than it did then.

[ninjalie.livejournal.com]

Awesome! hehehe

[twirlgrrl.livejournal.com]

:)

[righteousbaby.livejournal.com]

Love it!

[twirlgrrl.livejournal.com]

You like the dark stuff too, huh? :)